by C'mon, I wanna read the rest of it, lol. You got me hooked with this part, lol.
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you read that already, that was fast
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Yup, I read it already, I'm not exactly a slow reader, but I actually got a sneak preview 
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Chojin wrote:C'mon, I wanna read the rest of it, lol. You got me hooked with this part, lol.
Hahaha!!
Glad you like it! And good that you're hooked! That was the plan.
Mwahahahahaaa!!
I'll post part two soon. Hehe!!
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ROFL, trust you to have them play Guitar Hero. I hope you're hard at work on part 3. Now you have to post it soon, I wanna read it...
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Chojin wrote:ROFL, trust you to have them play Guitar Hero. I hope you're hard at work on part 3. Now you have to post it soon, I wanna read it...
Hahaha! How did you know it was Guitar Hero!? I just said it was a game... with a guitar controller... that you strum... and click... >_>;;
Maybe I should confirm it. Product placement! Just like a movie *cough*Transformers*cough* ! LMFAO!!
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There was product placement in Transformers??? I must watch it again so I can spot it
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Chojin wrote:There was product placement in Transformers??? I must watch it again so I can spot it
Hahaha!! As much as I loved that movie; it went waaayyy over-board on the advertising.
But anyways, I haven't even started the third installment yet. I mean, I have in my mind, but I've not typed anything up yet. I'll hopefully get to it tonight or tomorrow.
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Kitai wrote:"Right now?" Michelangelo tries again. "Don't I get the snooze option?"
This is the line that got me laughing, rofl. I can so imagine Mikey saying that. I loved this part. I'm really getting into this story.
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Chojin wrote:Kitai wrote:"Right now?" Michelangelo tries again. "Don't I get the snooze option?"
This is the line that got me laughing, rofl. I can so imagine Mikey saying that. I loved this part. I'm really getting into this story.
Hehehe, glad to hear it!
Writing this is awesome coz I write it as I can imagine it (I'm a major daydreamer). And whenever I write dialogue, I can hear their voices in my head (well, TMNT 2007 voices), and it gives me a right giggle sometimes.
I'm lovin' doing this!!
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I see they finally met up, too bad about the circumstances, lol. Can't wait to see where you take it next ^_^
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Chojin wrote:Can't wait to see where you take it next ^_^
A dragon eats them.
Everybody dies.
The end.
Oooonly joking!!
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Phew... please don't scare me like that
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Mwahahaha!!
Nice to know it's not just me enjoying this fic. Hehe!!
The fifth installment is finished and it'll probably be up tomorrow. ^^
Nice to know it's not just me enjoying this fic. Hehe!!
The fifth installment is finished and it'll probably be up tomorrow. ^^
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It's tomorrow now, lol
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Bring on part 7, I want to find out if she pulls through in it. There are a number of things I would like to see, such as her playing GH3 against Mikey ^_^
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Oh no, what's happened to Casey O_O
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Chojin wrote:Oh no, what's happened to Casey O_O
I told you before:
A dragon eats them.
Trogdooooorrrrr!!!
Just kidding!!
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I was gonna say, please don't be killing off one of my favourite, mammalian characters, lol
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ooh, I'm liking this, they're both waking up. I can't wait until the next part
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Chojin wrote:ooh, I'm liking this, they're both waking up. I can't wait until the next part
Glad you're enjoying it!! ^_^
Chapter One is also now available on Deviant Art:
TMNT: New Beginnings
Chapter One: First Sight
Chapter One: First Sight
Part nine coming right here, to Nexus Beach, very very soon!!
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I'll be sure to comment on them on DA as well, then.
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Chojin wrote:I'll be sure to comment on them on DA as well, then.
Thanks, hun!! ^_^
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I'm liking where this is leading, and it's good to see that they've finally met properly. I'm looking forward to the next part.
Good work, as always
Good work, as always
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ROFL, I can totally see Raph doing that.
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