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    [FanFic] Batman: A Split Decision

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    Post by Nightwolf Sat Jul 26, 2008 6:37 am

    Hey folks. I started writing a Batman story but got stuck after the first chapter! But what I was thinking is that I post the first chapter here and you all can go on to re-write the first chapter, continue on with the story. Whatever you want. Here's the first chapter.

    A Split Decision

    Chapter 1

    “I don’t like this boss. We don’t know who’s invited us to come here.” James said as he was driving the black Mercedes with blacked out windows. “Well everything happens for a reason James. We’ll soon find out what. I’m interested to see what’s going to happen. Especially if it’s about the Batman.” Replied Scarecrow. The rain was coming down hard on the windscreen of the car heading on Gotham Central. The people of Gotham City were few on the streets as night fall was approaching. The people knew that night fall wasn’t the safest time for being on the streets of Gotham City. The criminals were at home causing chaos during the nightfall. And The Scarecrow was no exception. But he also knew night fall attracted something else: Batman. For years Batman had watched over Gotham City and the crime that had been there. Scarecrow knew that Batman was winning the war on crime recently and was curious to know why he had been called to this meeting at the Gotham Central Hotel which had been closed for two years to the day. “We’re here boss.” James said as they pulled into the parking lot. “Indeed we are.” As Scarecrow looked out up at the gathering darkness of nightfall. “Indeed we are.”

    As The Riddler and his two men walked down the stairs, he noticed it was getting colder as they headed into the basement. “I don’t think we’re alone gentlemen.” He said. “What do you mean Riddler? Who else is here?” replied one of his men “Someone cold is here too. And I think I know who. Mr Freeze.” And sure enough as they entered the basement, they saw the back of Mr Freeze sat at a table. And next to him were sat Deadshot, then Catwoman and then Killer Croc. And on the other side was Harley Quinn, Poison Ivy, Bane, and The Joker. And sat at the end of the table was The Scarecrow with an empty chair next to him with The Riddler’s name on it. The Riddler looked at everyone as he took his seat. “Interesting to see you all here tonight ladies and gentlemen….and croc.” Said The Joker. Killer Croc just looked at him and smiled and said “Well the inside of my belly is a better sight. Would you like to see it?” Joker replied “I need a new pair of boots made of some kind of reptilian skin. Do you know any...” Tink! All of the heads of the table turned to see a coin flipping in the air and saw a figure come out of the shadows flipping the same coin repeatedly. The figure was wearing a suit that was white on the right side and black on the left side. As the figure walked towards the table his badly black and red scarred left side of his face had come into view. The unmistakable face of Harvey Dent or better known to everyone as Two Face. “If you put as much thought into killing Batman as you did into killing and hating each other, we wouldn’t all be here.” Said Two Face in his usual mono tone. “No everybody, we called you all here to put something on the table that you might find interesting.” Wait a minute here. I have one question: Are we talking to Harvey here or the other half?” Asked Harley Quinn. “Harvey hasn’t been around for quite some time Miss Quinn. And it’s a good thing because we’ve come up with a plan that has been tried many times before but never achieved: kill Batman.” “I guess the OTHER side has lost some of its brain cells.” Replied The Joker. “You called us here for THIS Two Face?” Said Deadshot. What do you think we’ve been trying to do after all this time? Shoot at him for fun?” The Scarecrow said “I don’t think Two Face has that in mind Deadshot. But I have to agree with the others. We’ve tried to kill Batman for years with no success. The Batman is a hard man to kill.” “That’s right he is Scarecrow. But not the MAN himself.” Replied Two Face. “Wait a minute. I think I know what you’re saying. De-mask the Batman to kill the man.” Said Catwoman. “Exactly.” Replied Two Face. “We know that underneath the mask is a normal person like all the people that walk Gotham City. Chances are you may have met him before and never knew it. Now we know what it will take to find out who he is. The question we ask EVERYONE at this table is: Can you put aside your differences with each other to do this? We know we can. If it means the end of The Batman, we are willing to do that.” Mr Freeze said “After so long of fighting him, I know that unless he is dead, I will never be rid of him. But then again, I can’t imagine life without him. I can’t really remember anything else but fighting him. I’m sorry Two Face but count me out.” “Me too.” said Killer Croc. “As much as I hate him, I want to be able to stand toe to toe with my greatest adversary and fight him.” “It’s a good idea but it wouldn’t work. We’d have the whole Gotham Police force after us. And I have too much to lose.” Said Deadshot. Catwoman strarted “He’s someone who….” “ We figured this would happen.” Two Face interrupted. “Boys.” And as he said that, 20 men all armed with machine guns stepped out of the shadows behind Deadshot, Killer Croc, Mr Freeze and Catwoman and opened fire on them! The rest of the villains all ducked for cover under the table but noticed that there was no gun fire coming in their direction. The gun fire stopped. They all came up from underneath the table. They could not believe their eyes. Catwoman, Killer Croc, Mr Freeze and Deadshot were all a bloody mess from the gunfire inflicted upon them. Two Face walked behind the bullet filled villains and pulled out his pistol. He stood behind Catwoman and put the gun to her head and fired. He walked down to the table and did the same for each of the other three. He stopped in front of The Riddler and said “You and the rest of them have made the right choice.” “Then let us begin.”
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    Post by Chojin Sat Jul 26, 2008 11:58 am

    So let me get this straight, this is no ordinary fanfic, this is one that we all write, yes?

    If so, I wouldn't have made Harvey/Two Face kill Deadshot, Killer Croc, Victor Freeze and Catwoman. I'd make him toss the coin then end it there, letting the next person decide their fates. Or I would've included the coin toss, anyway.
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    Post by Nightwolf Sat Jul 26, 2008 10:07 pm

    It's one everyone can write yes. I admit I wasn't too happy with it overall. Which I why I thought others could do a better job.

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