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    Chojin
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    Rock Bottom

    Post by Chojin on Sat Nov 28, 2009 10:12 am

    I致e hit rock bottom,
    My descent will stop.
    I知 way down low,
    So far from the top.

    I want to smile,
    When I can but frown.
    How can I get up,
    When I知 so let down.

    With no ladder to climb,
    No stairs nor rope.
    Climbing all alone,
    No feeling of hope.

    Starting the climb,
    A foreboding task.
    Just a little help,
    Is that too much to ask?

    Alone I climb,
    I知 halfway there.
    My fingers slip,
    Falling back down there.

    Again I climb,
    Still all alone.
    It痴 a constant struggle,
    When I知 on my own.

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    Re: Rock Bottom

    Post by Species on Wed Dec 09, 2009 11:26 am

    some what depressing but well written, and sums up my mind state as soon as i get to work.
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    Re: Rock Bottom

    Post by Chojin on Wed Dec 09, 2009 1:23 pm

    Sadly, when I wrote this, I was going through a particularly tough period. It's the only positive thing that came out of it, really.

    Unfortunately for me, this is how I feel pretty much all the time, at the moment. With any luck, things will improve for me soon and maybe I'll be able to write a poem that is in no way depressive, lol.


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